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thesis statement for thomas jefferson term paper

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badcrazygirl

Thomas Jefferson was a man who used his writings and his intelligence to inspire and revolutionize American citizens and the United States of America.
whats another word i can use instead of revolutionize?



marky03

Dark try not to use and... and ...and in one sentence. maybe commas

marky03

Thomas Jefferson was a man who used his writings, with his intelligence to inspire citizens, and to revolutionize American citizens and the United States of America.

That any good? just trying to help

RocknRollGirl

All of these words are Related Word:  alter, change, modify; recast, refashion, reform, remodel; redraw, restyle, revamp, revise; metamorphose, transfigure, transform, transmogrify; overthrow and overturn.  Hope one of these will work for you?

badcrazygirl

that thesis statement works thanks a bunch much appreciated

bigbear78

Quote from: darkearthgoddess on October 06, 2004, 04:50:45 AM
Thomas Jefferson was a man who used his writings and his intelligence to inspire and revolutionize American citizens and the United States of America.
whats another word i can use instead of revolutionize?

How about:

Thomas Jefferson was a man who inspired and revolutionized the American Citizens and the USA though his writings and intelligence. :D

badcrazygirl

watch the grammer through* lol but it's good but i like the first better

DEBKARLAR

something doesn't look right

"Thomas Jefferson was a man who used his writings...."

was that all he used his writing for?

how about
Thomas Jefferson was a man who WITH his writings

"the American Citizens and the USA though his writings and intelligence."

which American north /south?

how about
The Citizens of the USA

what ever you decide to do Dark . Read /Reread
and then read  it to at least 2-3 other persons mom/dad aunt/uncle ect...

badcrazygirl